Momma’s Man
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IMDB rating: 6.50 Plot: A man who has avoided his wife and child at home has a change of heart after an imposed stay in his own parents’ loft. |
Actors: Boren Matt,Jacobs Ken,Edson Richard,Arcilesi Piero,Drama,
what do you think of the lyrics? honest opinion LOL?
Two girls were in your heart, but baby i want you to know
if u still think about them i’ll tore u apart,
it’s not just jealousy! but when i’m with ur all mine trust me i make u glow
n no one gets u better than me so you’ll always keep me if u were smart,
sure i’m not that good or into art, i keep no charts, or make any tarts ,
i’mma tell u what i do i can dance slow, but hey let’s go to the start,
lets go back one year ago, i use to n still will make ur mind blow,
n make u go oh oO, i know i can get any man to distroy his stupid sow,
n make me a sweat shirt so he’ll freakin sew,
even thoughgh i don’t like that but some of them bow,
n eat meat if i told them while it’s still raw,
or cut off a toe, n get his momma to throw,
i’m not a show but what should i do if everywhere i go there’ll be a crew,
or a bunch of ppl starin in a row,
or some gay sayin yo while he’s walkin in the street to his friends thinkin that they flow
i’m wishin that they just trip n go, cause they’re so damn slow
i like snow but skiin with any guy other than u i’ll say nono
hey i aint low or a freakin hoe, i’m just such a damn pro,
i’m sorry but any girl looks at u i’mma break her jow,
baby are we clear? so no chit chat with girls or hi hello
LOL HONEST OPINION XP !!
Not so good.
Your Uncle Dodge! | Jan 27, 2010
Haha, it’s a cool lyric with funny bits here and there, and some good rhymes and rhythms. However, there’s a whole lot more to song, or in this case, lyric writing, than just writing out lines wuth random rhymes to perhaps, a piece of melody. To those unfamiliar to the actual craft of songwriting, it may be surprising to find out just how much structure a song has to have.
Read up on song form and other aspects of songwriting or lyric writing from site such as www.musesmuse.com. They have some really helpful articles that will get you started. They also provide forums where you could post songs for critique. Alternatively, you could visit http://www.writerswrite.com/cgi-bin/song art.pl. It has some really useful articles teaching you how to write a song.
Like I said earlier, your lyric has some good lines and ideas but it lacks structure. Before you start writing a song, you might wanna ask yourself, "what genre do I want this song to be in?". In this case, it sounds like you want an upbeat hiphop or rap. I’m not familiar with these genres but I can give you a rough idea of what you should do to improve the ltric=)
First, every song has to have a hook. A hook is a line of words, attached with a melody, that will be what people will be remembering your song by. It normally appears in the chorus of a song. Now, song form. Many songs these days follow the structure, verse-chorus-verse-chorus-bridge-chorus. This may be different in rap, or not, but this is the most popular form songs take.
To put it simply, verses tell the story, the chorus is the main idea of what the song is talking about, its "message", if you will. Each verse follows the same structure set by you. More specifically, if verse 1 has four lines, where the first and second line has 9 syllables and the last two lines have 8 syllables, sybsequent verses should follow similar structure. Rhyme schemes follow this rule too. If verse 1 has an AABB rhyme scheme, verse 2 should have the same. This makes things much easier for the words to fit into the same melody. Yep, each verse shuld have the same melody. The chorus, which contains the hook, has a different melody from the verses, with probably a different tempo and all. The chorus should be the place where the message of the song kicks in. It’ll be the most powerful part of the song that will impact a listener and make him or her go humming to it even if the song isn’t playing at that time and place. It should have a different structure from your verses to make it distinguishable from the verses. It should have a different cadence, the natural rhthm of words, as well. The bridge is usually a short, transitional part of a song that gives a different perspective to a song. It should have a completely different melody from the rest of the song. It should be like "a breath of fresh air" before going back into the song, to make things more interesting and to keep the listener engaged.
I’ll just stop here. It’ll be much better if you read articles written by experienced songwriters. What I said might have been just a brief summary of those articles but it doesn’t beat the real thing. Hope this helps a little! Good luck!
JollyBlueGiant | Jan 27, 2010
What lyrics? I only see half-formed words here.
slimshadybsb | Jan 27, 2010 Allgemein | Comment (0)
Black Dynamite
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IMDB rating: 7.60 Plot: This is the story of 1970s African-American action legend Black Dynamite. The Man killed his brother, pumped heroin into local orphanages, and flooded the ghetto with adulterated malt liquor. Black Dynamite was the one hero willing to fight The Man all the way from the blood-soaked city streets to the hallowed halls of the Honky House.. |
i find Black Dynamite here and download version for iPod
Actors: Chapman Kevin,Christopher Sean,Davidson Tommy,Edson Richard,Edwards Jason Jack,Ethridge Jon Kent,Gluck Cory,Hall Arsenio,Heath Darrel,Johnson Andray,Kerry John,Lewis IV Jesse,Lewis Neil,McKnight Brian,McManus James,Action,Comedy,
What are some good comedies?
Here is a list of all the comedies I have so that you don’t list them.. 
Napoleon Dynamite
Lymelife
Dumb and Dumber
Waterboy
Men in Black
Men in Black II
The Cable Guy
Friday
Dirty Work
Nice Dreams
Holes
All Austin Powers
All Scary Movies
The New Guy
RV
Old School
White Chicks
Shallow Hal
The Girl Next Door
Just Married
The Animal
Along Came Polly
Meet The Parents
Meet The Fockers
There’s Something About Mary
The Big Lebowski
Fever Pitch
The Wedding Crashers
Borat
Bruno
Rat Race
Me, Myself, and Irene
Elf
Anchorman
Click
The Proposal
Billy Madison
Big Daddy
50 First Dates
Mr. Deeds
Fun With Dick and Jane
The Onion Movie
Jackass Vol. 1
Jackass The Movie
Jackass The Movie 2
Jackass The Lost Tapes
Rush Hour 1, 2, 3
The Sandlot
Without A Paddle
The Cat In The Hat
Knocked Up
Adventureland
I Love You Man
Away We Go
The Simpsons Movie
Meet The Spartans
Tropic Thunder
Hot Rod
Monsters Vs. Aliens
Horton Hears A Who
Enchanted
Super Troopers
Dumb and Dumber(er)
Saturday Night Live Seasons
Superbad
Juno
Little Nicky
I Now Pronounce You Chuck and Larry
Half Baked
The 40 Year Old Virgin
Forgetting Sarah Marshall
Paul Blart: Mall Cop
Van Wilder
Year One
South Park The Movie
Shaun Of The Dead
Sunshine Cleaning
Fired Up
Observe and Report
Pineapple Express
Grandma’s Boy
Badder Santa
Porky’s
Zack and Miri Make A Porno
Team America: World Police
The Heartbreak Kid
The Ugly Truth
Revenge Of The Nerds
Office Space
Wake Up Ron Burgundy
Wayne’s World
Dude, Where’s My Car?
Animal House
Saving Silverman
Up
How High?
Dance Of The Dead
Mary & Max
Bubble Boy
Stewie Griffin: The Untold Story
Family Guy: Blue Harvest
The Goods: Live Hard, Sell Hard
Step Brothers
Spread
Four Christmases
Wristcutters
500 Days Of Summer
17 Again
Sex Drive
She’s The Man
Amelie
School Of Rock
The Incredibles
Elf
Terry Fator: Live From Las Vegas
Jimmy Carr
Finding Nemo
Edward Scissorhands
The Hangover
Smart People
Okay.. That’s ALL of the comedies I have… (yes, I just looked through my DVD collection)
Can anyone recommend any that I don’t have? Thank you. 
if you like stoner movies like Grandma’s Boy, check out Wet Hot American Summer. best movie ever.
and, if you go to http://dubjones.tv/beans, you can check out a stoner webisode series. 7 episodes make up 1 hr, and it’s awesome!
JStyles | Nov 11, 2009
try in Bruges
Pete | Nov 11, 2009
Can you get British TV DVDs like Father Ted, Black Books, IT Crowd.
lercio | Nov 11, 2009
Ace Ventura One & Two
American Pie & American Wedding
Senator Padme Amidala Skywalker | Nov 11, 2009
I don’t think I saw Caddyshack on the list, and that is an all-time classic, and so is Blazing Saddles
Moon the Loon | Nov 11, 2009
Dumb & Dumber, Mars Attacks, Stuck on You, Tropic Thunder, The Hangover, The Goods, Click, Be Cool, Anger Management, Austin Powers, The Chase, Used Cars, The Naked Gun, Dirty Work, Joe Dirt, Saving Silverman, The Adventures of Ford Fairlane, There’s Something About Mary, Rat Race, School of Rock, The Rocker, Run Fatboy Run, Analyse This, Mickey Blue Eyes, Hot Rod, The Pink Panther, Meet Bill, Boat Trip, Stepbrothers, I Love You Man, Waterboy, The Cable Guy,
Me, Myself, and Irene, Billy Madison, Big Daddy, Fun With Dick and Jane, The Onion Movie,
Superbad, Forgetting Sarah Marshall, Paul Blart: Mall Cop, Wayne’s World, Dude, Where’s My Car?, and Little Miss Sunshine.
Assistant Manager Man | Nov 12, 2009 Allgemein | Comment (0)